Well honestly...
The music made me puke badly. I hate all that anime crap lol...
Now about the video, You still need to learn a lot.
Here is few basic steps.
In-Game resolution must be 1280x720 (720p HD - For HD Quality on YouTube)
Use Fraps if possible or Even i prefer DxTory. (Recording Software)
If your computer can handle Recording & Playing @ 30FPS then you good to go.
Edit & Render the footage with Sony Vegas if possible, And if not then u can use Windows movie maker(It' still has a good quality tho
)
But still for the first time if u had a good music
... And a good quality i would say Awesome Rage.
Still a good rage tho but could be better
..
P.S: There is 100% No Spread in BLR
You don't even have to use sight aim...
-Psycho.